Ok added some more to chapter two to the story will be starting chapter 3 soon please people tell me what you think, tell me what i should change, tell me what i should add, tell me what i can do next im getting myself into a block

Thanks,
-Chris

finally up to Chapter two, ive done a bit of editing to the story and condensed alot of it into one chapter and took out the previous prologue, may put it back in, may not. Just didn't like it at this time. Anyways started into Chapter 2 only a paragraph in but i do plan to continue working on it at least a paragraph every few days. could use some more comments on it, let me know what you think, give me suggestions or something. To those of you that have already thanks for your support, and thanks for your tips.

after some time now ive finally finished my rendition of Adult Link, check it out, Im hoping my shadowing and lighting is improving.

Im also planning on putting some more work out soon, perhaps more into my story Johnny Argothan, and maybe a couple different deviations to work on my shadowing and lighting. Due to being diagnosed with phenmonia today i am unable to go to work until tuesday which should give me plenty of time for my creativity.

Johnny Argothan UPDATE: i've finally named my teacher, check it out in my story, and added another paragraph or two to it, i don't know if i like my style of conversations and i may go back and change that.

anyways thanks to my readers and editors.

Ok, made some more progress on Johnny Argothan, changed some of the format, and fixed some typos. Now im thinking of what im going to call his History Teacher, not sure just yet how it is. Any type of Response will be great either negative or positive

sorry its been awhile since ive posted any more of my work, cant seem to have any ideas. i've got writers block and artist block it seems, lol. i'll try to come up with something to add soon.